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CarsonZi

Canada
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Posted - Jun 28 2010 :  3:52:10 PM  Show Profile  Visit CarsonZi's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Message
Love overflowing
Prostrating in surrender
I humbly let go

Uninhibited
Resting in the Divine flow
All is perfection

Suffering is gone
Embracing the whole of Life
Pure bliss consciousness

Nothing left to do
We become a conduit
All is seen as Self

Arriving back home
The journey has just begun
Time to start living

Emptiness is known
To be empty of itself
Nothing left to be


Except life itself.


Love!

Kirtanman

USA
1651 Posts

Posted - Jun 28 2010 :  9:03:22 PM  Show Profile  Visit Kirtanman's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply


Way haikool, Carson
Profound yet fun like life now
Big haikudos, eh





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machart

USA
342 Posts

Posted - Jun 28 2010 :  10:04:07 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Carson Kirtanman
Your contributions inspire
Keep posting with LOVE!
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Suryakant

USA
259 Posts

Posted - Jun 29 2010 :  10:46:10 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
"washing potatoes"
Perhaps CarsonZi will be
"the hundredth monkey"

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stevenbhow

Japan
352 Posts

Posted - Jun 29 2010 :  7:48:08 PM  Show Profile  Visit stevenbhow's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
New Koan

If the one hundredth monkey
washes his potatoes
than do all the Bodhisattvas
finally get to enter Nirvana?
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Kirtanman

USA
1651 Posts

Posted - Jun 29 2010 :  9:14:13 PM  Show Profile  Visit Kirtanman's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
quote:
Originally posted by CarsonZi

Love overflowing
Prostrating in surrender
I humbly let go

Uninhibited
Resting in the Divine flow
All is perfection

Suffering is gone
Embracing the whole of Life
Pure bliss consciousness

Nothing left to do
We become a conduit
All is seen as Self

Arriving back home
The journey has just begun
Time to start living

Emptiness is known
To be empty of itself
Nothing left to be


Except life itself.


Love!




I just re-read these, and got chills/goosebumps.

Good freakin' job, Brother Carson.



Beautiful True Words
I Am Loving Expressing
Here As Us All Now

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CarsonZi

Canada
3189 Posts

Posted - Jun 30 2010 :  01:31:06 AM  Show Profile  Visit CarsonZi's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Hey Everyone and thanks for the kind words

I don't write poetry very often (I used to write song lyrics a lot, but actual poetry just isn't my thing.....not usually anyways) but when I feel the need, I just let 'er rip. This one flowed out in about the same amount of time it takes to read it.

@ Suryakant and Stevenbhow....I'm truly sorry for my ignorance, but what's up with the "hundredth monkey" thing? Am I missing something? Obviously I am Please fill me in.

@ Kirtanman.....glad you felt "the flow" from these words. Everytime I re-read this I get tossed back into the moment of inspiration....it gives me goosebumps/chills too. Glad you enjoyed.

Moments of Silence
Washing over me like waves
This is who I am.

Love!


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stevenbhow

Japan
352 Posts

Posted - Jun 30 2010 :  04:57:18 AM  Show Profile  Visit stevenbhow's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I don't remember the details exactly, but there was an experiment done on a remote island somewhere with monkeys. I think originally ten monkeys were taught to wash their potatoes. Over time other monkeys began to learn the skill. When the 100th monkey started washing his potatoes suddenly all the monkeys on the island started to wash their potatoes as well whether they had been taught the skill or not.

Basically, the idea is that if enough people begin meditating eventually we'll reach a critical mass and everyone on the planet will take up the practice and change the world.
Though, I think the original idea was applied to sustainable living.

Beautiful poem, btw!
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CarsonZi

Canada
3189 Posts

Posted - Jun 30 2010 :  10:52:06 AM  Show Profile  Visit CarsonZi's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply


Cool! Thanks for filling me in Steven!

Love!
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porcupine

USA
193 Posts

Posted - Jul 09 2010 :  06:50:57 AM  Show Profile  Visit porcupine's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
theres a kabbalist in love with a sufi goddess
shes bad at haikus
send clear cookies of G-D!
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