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zamolxes
Romania
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 Posted - Feb 11 2021 : 5:21:33 PM
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As per my cyber-ayp-friends suggestions, here I present my poetry.
As light birds swaying on Earth's belly hairs
So am I dancing up and down the ol' Heaven's stairs
And lost in reveries of knowns and unknowns
I wander at the expense of my crystalline mind's bones.
Gladly I travel this narrow, yet all encompassing path of words
Inattentive of the road, mesmerized by fleeting birds
Birds which sing nature's humble song
Stretching their feathers to take me along.
Behold the light of god's pure joy
Playing in his hand with some innocent boy
And looking up at wisdom's colorful embrace, I ask
Hey Google...? Mind you show me the rhyme's dictionary interface? |
Edited by - zamolxes on Feb 11 2021 5:24:26 PM |
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interpaul
USA
551 Posts |
Posted - Feb 13 2021 : 02:08:15 AM
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| Zamolxes, Never would have guessed one could see "crystalline mind's bones" followed by "hey Google...?" in the same poem. It is great you are exploring so many paths on your journey. Don't let the lack of responses in the forums discourage you expressing yourself. I get a sense illuminated poetry is not the primary reason people come to the AYP sites. I am personally more drawn to topics closer to the yoga practices. You never know who you'll inspire, or when! I see people respond many years later to posts. I would encourage you to keep creating. |
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zamolxes
Romania
93 Posts |
Posted - Feb 13 2021 : 05:25:06 AM
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Thank you Interpaul,
I'll be sure to keep posting from time to time, I find that when I write with the intention to share it some magic happens and my mind opens up. Maybe it is a way of "giving" away the little fruition yoga has had in me. And it may be also a way to get over the expectations, that "let's see what people think of my post".
Again, thank you for your kindness interpaul |
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Cato
Germany
239 Posts |
Posted - Feb 14 2021 : 07:03:37 AM
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| Interpaul, I love the way you encourage people all over the forum. And I guess in your private life as well. Thank you. |
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Blanche
USA
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Posted - Feb 14 2021 : 07:40:22 AM
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interpaul
USA
551 Posts |
Posted - Feb 15 2021 : 01:42:27 AM
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| Cato, Nice of you to say. I have gained a lot from this community and It feels good to contribute some when I can. |
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k.cherry
USA
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Posted - Apr 23 2021 : 5:46:53 PM
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