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greymatter

USA
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Posted - Jan 20 2015 :  9:34:44 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Message
Hey everyone,

I've been experiencing a lot of activity in my neck and throat. I know they say that when your throat chakra is opening, you should write poetry. So I did.

If I were to be in love
Entangled in your thoughts divine
Entangled fits me like a glove
And love itself will soon be mine

I hope you like it. My poetry is usually terrible. Thanks for letting me share this!

BlueRaincoat

United Kingdom
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Posted - Jan 21 2015 :  05:21:19 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
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BillinL.A.

USA
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Posted - Jan 21 2015 :  3:06:11 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I like it Greymatter!
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Ecdyonurus

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kumar ul islam

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Anima

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Great use of mood and tense in the first and last lines! A lovely poem. Thank you.
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