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Anima

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Posted - Mar 31 2014 :  3:12:46 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Message
A dark poem. Do you know Her name?


The Shark

Men are swept away by prideful vanity,
Accepting their fate, yet only when taken.
Herald the shark to swiftness, dear prey.
And feel sharp, gleeful gnashing of teeth.

Know Her, fierce--creature of the deep!
All have met the gaze of those demonic eyes,
Longing for the bite of ecstasy in defeat:
In hidden waters thrashes bloody victory.

Merciless, She swims, circling the kill,
Abundant is Her justice, agony Her thrill.
Avoid Her if you can, but only if She wills.

BillinL.A.

USA
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Posted - Mar 31 2014 :  6:46:38 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Yikes!!!...or Lordy, Lordy, Lordy...you did make me feel her!
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lalow33

USA
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Posted - Apr 01 2014 :  9:04:52 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Awesome!
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Bodhi Tree

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Posted - Apr 02 2014 :  11:07:32 AM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Hehehe...purification has teeth, at times, does it not?...
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Bodhi Tree

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Posted - Apr 02 2014 :  11:18:38 AM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Hope you don't mind if I springboard off the tone and do a somersault to prolong the continuum of sharkness...

she was the queen of the slipstream
all wrapped in seaweed, though she had claws that could snap you in two
she had to stay mean to protect the terrain from the cancer of consumption

so the disease was devoured by her sharp truth which cut through bone
leaving nothing but remnants of marrow in its wake.
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Anima

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Posted - Apr 02 2014 :  7:42:32 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Thanks, guys!
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