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Ananda

3115 Posts

Posted - Aug 05 2013 :  1:44:08 PM  Show Profile  Visit Ananda's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Budai is said to travel giving candy to poor children, only asking a penny from Zen monks or lay practitioners he meets. One day a monk walks up to him and asks, "What is the meaning of Zen?" Budai drops his bag. "How does one realize Zen?" he continues. Budai then takes up his bag and continues on his way.
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maheswari

Lebanon
2520 Posts

Posted - Aug 06 2013 :  02:28:12 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
beautiful ...thx for sharing dear Ananda
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 06 2013 :  4:22:34 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
quote:
Originally posted by Ananda

Budai is said to travel giving candy to poor children, only asking a penny from Zen monks or lay practitioners he meets. One day a monk walks up to him and asks, "What is the meaning of Zen?" Budai drops his bag. "How does one realize Zen?" he continues. Budai then takes up his bag and continues on his way.



Love it! To be yourSelf, all you have to do is drop everything.

But what about all the stuff you don't even know you're holding onto? I have pennies stuck all over!
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 06 2013 :  4:23:35 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Expectations

You should take this class,
Become a yoga teacher.
It will do you good.




Defensiveness

I get the feeling
You think I should try so much
Harder than I am.


Why do I invest
So much mental energy
Defending myself?

Edited by - whippoorwill on Aug 06 2013 4:54:20 PM
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SeySorciere

Seychelles
1571 Posts

Posted - Aug 07 2013 :  06:58:03 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Stray beam of moonlight
silver-winged giant moths dance
to the cricket song

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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 07 2013 :  4:05:31 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
quote:
Originally posted by SeySorciere

Stray beam of moonlight
silver-winged giant moths dance
to the cricket song





Wow!
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SeySorciere

Seychelles
1571 Posts

Posted - Aug 08 2013 :  06:37:49 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
No particular spiritual meaning whatsoever, except the beauty of the moment, but as long as we were doing Haikus I thought I'd throw it in

Thank you. Great thread.



Sey
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 16 2013 :  08:02:24 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I'm ever fearful
Of being hurt by others,
But I hurt myself.
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 16 2013 :  08:06:55 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
It's all on you, Liz
You must hold it together
Or all collapses.
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Bodhi Tree

2972 Posts

Posted - Aug 17 2013 :  8:47:52 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
To collapse and crumble
In a victorious defeat of paradoxes
Will reveal: what is fragile, and what is strong?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 17 2013 :  10:50:54 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Holding together
Is like restraining the wind.
It blows nonetheless.

Edited by - whippoorwill on Aug 18 2013 9:44:41 PM
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Bodhi Tree

2972 Posts

Posted - Aug 18 2013 :  10:30:12 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
To make mistakes is inevitable
To fall into incomprehensible bliss is our destiny
To let the flow of knowingness overcome the intellect is wisdom.
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apatride

New Caledonia
94 Posts

Posted - Aug 18 2013 :  11:12:16 PM  Show Profile  Visit apatride's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
She's not wrong, only reflective.
I'm making it all up.
Bless her!
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Etherfish

USA
3615 Posts

Posted - Aug 19 2013 :  09:36:20 AM  Show Profile  Visit Etherfish's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I read about haiku, and English haiku relax the rules applied to Japanese, which are quite rigid. In Japanese, it is not just 5,7,5 syllables, as Japanese units are shorter than the syllable, where the word "rain" would count as three.
Then they have to have a reference to the season, and two juxtaposed ideas with a "cutting" word in between, which determines the relationship between the two ideas, which must be every day observable, not just concepts.
How's that for difficult?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 19 2013 :  09:45:07 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
LOL I'm finding 5,7,5 quite challenging! I didn't know about the other structural requirements. I think it's interesting that the two juxtaposed ideas are happening kind of naturally, but the core stories I'm distilling here are all concepts. It might be fun to do a real Haiku.

Edited by - whippoorwill on Aug 19 2013 09:54:23 AM
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 19 2013 :  09:46:50 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I accept myself
Only if they accept me?
Who needs approval?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 20 2013 :  10:20:45 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
I must get this done
By thus-and-such a date/time.
Who has to? And when?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 22 2013 :  8:25:21 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
What do I want most?
Viewing my thoughts, I find I
Want to be precious.





Why do I believe
That I'm not already all
I wish to become?




Who wants to be special?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 23 2013 :  1:06:16 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
A firefighter
Dreamed of being a hero.
They rescued themselves.




Don't look for my aid.
There's no such thing as rescue.
Extricate yourself.




The paramedic,
The ER doctor, they are
All you. Don't you see?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 23 2013 :  1:07:39 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Cicadas singing
Louder than a jet turbine.
What is listening?
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 23 2013 :  2:14:43 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
A bird lies dying.
Should I speed it on its way?
Who is suffering?

Edited by - whippoorwill on Aug 23 2013 2:15:50 PM
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whippoorwill

USA
450 Posts

Posted - Aug 23 2013 :  9:08:20 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Kitty bites my hand
Then cringes from the blow, but
I stroke her soft fur.
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Bodhi Tree

2972 Posts

Posted - Aug 26 2013 :  11:11:44 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
A stream of sound
Poured out from Infinite Personality
Touches my ears.
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SeySorciere

Seychelles
1571 Posts

Posted - Aug 27 2013 :  03:23:10 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
He was perfect
The mirror of my Love
Reflecting my Love perfectly
Far from perfect was my Love
I slowly realized
From staring at the perfectly reflected imperfections
And still I screamed
And still I raged
For diamond brilliance
Of a perfect Love.



Sey
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Bodhi Tree

2972 Posts

Posted - Aug 27 2013 :  12:16:43 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Oh wow, that is really awesome, Sey. Thank you.
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