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Bodhi Tree

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Posted - Jun 30 2013 :  9:50:12 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Message
water, once again
ripples into my dreams
in nightmare puddles and ocean fantasies

i want to be lost in the landscape
and mesmerized by beings far beyond me

the diversity of an ecosystem, both inside and out,
dwarfs my whining figure
as i celebrate my smallness

for in feeling my smallness
i open to a grand oasis
that reduces me to a diamond speck of sand amidst an infinity of granularity

small in the body, but big in the untethered mind of awareness
i sweep through all stories told in time
to touch the variety of sacred expression

nowhere is a miracle absent

from ferocious beginnings
our wildness becomes tamed by genius alone
not by the confines of self-forced control
but by the voluntary willingness of abiding participation

i will seek to master this short window of opportunity--
caring not about failure nor about mistakes made by trying

as a wave breaks on the surface, so too will this chance die
and be re-born again
until the eternal cycle is satisfied.

Shanti

USA
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Posted - Jun 30 2013 :  10:09:10 PM  Show Profile  Visit Shanti's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
((((()))))
quote:
Originally posted by Bodhi Tree



i will seek to master this short window of opportunity--
caring not about failure nor about mistakes made by trying

as a wave breaks on the surface, so too will this chance die
and be re-born again
until the eternal cycle is satisfied.


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bewell

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Posted - Jul 01 2013 :  1:54:16 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Awesome!
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Anima

484 Posts

Posted - Jul 02 2013 :  2:15:17 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
quote:
Originally posted by Bodhi Tree

water, once again
ripples into my dreams
in nightmare puddles and ocean fantasies

i want to be lost in the landscape
and mesmerized by beings far beyond me

the diversity of an ecosystem, both inside and out,
dwarfs my whining figure
as i celebrate my smallness.



This is a very deep poem, and I especially like the first three verses, above.
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Bodhi Tree

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Posted - Jul 02 2013 :  5:05:57 PM  Show Profile  Visit Bodhi Tree's Homepage  Reply with Quote  Get a Link to this Reply
Thank you Shanti, bewell, and Anima Deorum. I appreciate the affirmations!
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