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Divineis
Canada
420 Posts |
 Posted - Mar 09 2013 : 1:27:53 PM
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Muddy waters
I’m treading on muddy waters with a muddy waters mind.
I’m looking for something I know I won’t find
It’s here they tell me… you will see.
BE BE BE.
**** that sh*t.
It’s not it.
The muddy water is getting deep.
Be yourself, take the leap.
I’m stuck though, that gosh darn muddy water.
It’s muck now, im really stuck.
I’ll break out, eventually.
Muddy waters mind, with that I will find.
Find what… some truth?
I’m searching with a muddy waters mind.
Maybe it’s the search.
The waters a bit less deep.
Search for what? I don’t even know anymore.
Less searchin’…
a bit more shallow.
I’m trying to clear out the muddy water with more mud.
A bit less shallow. But more real.
Hmrph, the waters clear now, though has particles of dirt in it.
****, it’s still just muddy water.
I almost convinced myself it was clear with a muddy waters mind
Oh well…
It’s all just mud anyway, let’s play in the mud.
I also have a poetry blog that you can follow at:http://zenherenow.wordpress.com/ |
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kembolini
United Kingdom
50 Posts |
Posted - Mar 31 2013 : 2:02:25 PM
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BillinL.A.
USA
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Posted - Mar 31 2013 : 5:40:17 PM
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Awesome Divineis!
What the hell, let's just play in the mud.
Thanks for sharing...I feel so much less alone! |
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Bodhi Tree
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Posted - Mar 31 2013 : 6:10:30 PM
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All this needs is a blues riff in the minor pentatonic scale and it'll be golden.  |
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mattb23
Australia
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Posted - Apr 06 2013 : 8:07:54 PM
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Nice...!
This one reminds of a popular Bible quote:
"These things I have spoken unto you, that in me ye might have peace. In the world ye shall have tribulation: but be of good cheer; I have overcome the world." John 16:3 KJV
Peace Divineis
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